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Review:SkitsandBits(forums) BitterSweetFlames(archives) says:
Okay. First off, there were a few words there that you typed up homonyms.. You know, sort of like instead of blew it became blue.. So maybe you should have someone check that..
Now, for the OC, glad to note that she's not Mary Sue. That's a plus for you. Also, the journal entries were funny.. Especially the first one.. lol
Okay, the only thing I have a problem about is the cliche with the stupid gorgeous girl and the bet (The "If he's not in love with me by *Blank* I will *Blank*) It's been done sooo many times before.. But then, on the upside this could be beneficial because you can show how good a writer you are by making this cliche original and totally your own.. That's all I can tell you so go!:D


me...;) Lol

Author's Response: Yeah, that was one thing I was really proud of myself for doing, was not making her a Mary Sue. And as for the cliche thing, I did notice that, but I'm not too sure how I'll wiggle out of it! It makes me a bit nervous actually. Thank you very much for the good review! Lots to think about there. I'm glad you found it funny :) I wasn't sure if I could do humour.

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