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Review:njhill22 says:
Hey Carrie! This is an interesting start. Moved a little too quick at some points and I had to go and reread to get what was going on. I do like the chemistry you have between David and Heidi. I thought you might just let her go off for questioning without him doing anything about it! Now, where did they apparate to?

Author's Response:
Thank you. :) I'm sorry that it went to fast. I'm revising the chapter a bit now, so perhaps that will help for future readers. I'm glad you like their chemistry. Wow, I really had you thinking that he'd send her off? I'm glad, because that was the point. ;) You'll find out in the next chapter where they went to. :)

-Carrie


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