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Review:HauntedLyra22 says:
so much better than the story before...it's much slower and you get more of Heather's thoughts and emotions in there, that's partially what i meant by my mindless babble about the whole delving into their phyce (or however the hell you spell it) so i really like it...oh and the chapters are longer and you try to paraphrase what was in the book...sorry but i hate when people do that!
oh and i agree with you that teh movie sorta sucked, it was missing alot of good pionts in the book!
rock on
-Wolf Girl
P.S. have you read DH yet? it was awesome!!

Author's Response: Thanks, yes this story was much slow because there was just so much downtime while they all waited. Definitely we will get more into thoughts with Heather and as we already know Harry's thoughts. Yes, I do paraphrase the book a lot right here but I'm hoping I won't as I go on just because of Heather and Harry's friendship, definitely there will be an important scene with Heather and Draco but I won't say, I know, as I read over a few forums talking about the movie I agree with Tonks not looking well like Tonks, and Lupin was in the guard at all, I was hoping to see Mrs. Black just to see Sirius say "I see you've met my mother" XD, Yes I have finished DH it was awesome so many died *cries* one of my favorite character died with no explanation of how I am still in shock, I don't wanna say who just in case its a spoiler thing and the staff here flips, but I think you can guess who, lol one of my friends i talked to online was like "I'm going to get chocolate" and i was like "why?" and she gave teary icon and said "to remember him by"

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