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Review:lovelyMarauders says:
I think that you are brilliantly talented.
This story was a sweet, cute, charming one-shot. Great job! :)
I thing that you added the right amount of humor and you got the characters perfectly.
I have a bit of advice, I suggest working a bit more on your descriptions. Not to say that they aren't good, just maybe a bit more work on them. But you have a lot of strong points as well, such as the way you portray characters and your dialogue.
Again, you are very talented and should be proud of this one-shot.
Thanks for providing me with a good read. :D

Keep it up!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice! I am working on descriptions

Your welcome... I promise to keep writing if you keep reviewing

Reviews fuel my creativity!

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