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Review:LexiGirl says:
Very good, I liked it. However, the whole part after the objection and Harry taking Draco's wand confused me. It seemed to move to quickly too understand. When her father was stupified (multiple times) she seemed frightened, but didn't do anything but cry slightly. If she really did detest her father so much she probably would have just gasped at the result (as no good person would want to see anyone hurt). But, if she really did care about him slightly, in her own weird way, then I would see her either running to him in worry just to check that he was alright, or her knees buckling and her facial expression showing that she was threatening to faint (you could even throw in a romantic bit there where James steadies her). But, don't get me wrong here, this story was very original and I quite enjoyed it. Oh, I have a question what was Marcus' reaction. I know that you said they were just friends and so, was he feeling the same way about the arranged marriage? Great job! 9/10

Author's Response: thank you, this review has been the most helpful and i will take these events into account and fix them as soon as the queue opens up again. thanks a lot for the nice constructive criticism. it realy helps.

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