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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
This was a very heartbreaking chapter, timeturner, very different in manner from the previous of this collection, yet still filled with the idea of temptation. Just goes to show one the varying facades that temptation can appear with. Somehow you make Lily and Sirius seem so natural together - that they were meant for each other. It's so perfect that I can't even think of anything good to say. =D

So I'll make stuff up off the top of my head. ;-) It's definitely the little details that make this story work so well. The little hole in his shirt, the smells and atmosphere of the hospital tent (it's so English Patient that it's funny - you meant to do that, right?) - all the feelings and emotions of the characters stacked on top of the descriptions of smells, touches, sounds makes this a rich story to read. It's short but has a lot to it - I don't want to say concise, but that comes to mind easiest - what I mean is that you don't waste words, but still create a setting and characters that come alive - they're real. It's a fantastic piece - definitely your most convincing and best written Sirius/Lily piece (and I thought that Noel and Reckless couldn't be beat!). =)

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