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Review:subtle_plan says:
Oh, I have to say I liked this story much better than I liked the other one I read about Sirius and Haley :D I like the way it's a songfic without really having the lyrics in it, because lyrics kinda bring you out of the story and Iruins the concentration (At least that's my opinion)

But when she talks to me, I feel like I could fly, and when her hand brushes mine, electricity courses through my veins. I love her, but nobody knows it but me. -- That one was really good!

With Haley, breaking hearts has never looked so cool. -- And that one was beautiful :)

And I love how it doesn't get sorted out in the end. Too many fics would have had an ending like "The reason I've been a player is because... I... I love you, Haley." -And then they run off in the sunset. I love the fact that you leave the ending hanging like an open thread, because if you hadn't it would have been way cliché.

Overall I think you did really good on this one :)

Author's Response: Thank you again so so so much I like this story without the lyrics too this one didn't follow the song but there was one line that stuck out. Thank you again! Gina

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