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Review:Tearlit says:
I feel the need to start off with the fact that I adore your chapter summaries. They are often quite hilarious, especially when you add action like * dramatic music * and * crowd cheers *. The chapter titles are quite nice as well. I also like that you reply to reviews! It makes me so happy to read what people reply to my reviews. If I see an author doesn’t reply to them I am much less likely to leave one, lol.

Ok…now to my review of chapter…what chapter am I on now? * checks * Ah yes, #14.

Have I mentioned yet that I really can’t stand Scrimgeour? You right him quite well but he’s such a horrible character!

Ah, I see the blue feet coming on. You did warn me multiple times I suppose. She seems to be rather insecure at times? Why would he be ashamed to date her?

And Sirius figures out person B…this should be interesting. Ok, not that interesting, lol, don’t get me wrong, still interesting, but there could have been so many lewd comments there. Course it could have promise later…

Ok, the feet aren’t that blue but the tongue is sharp. And now Remus tries to re-prove himself by taking her in public. Who wants to bet Dawlish makes an appearance? And he did, if only a mild one. I’m glad he’s backed off for now.

Oo she’s going to cook! First knitting now this. Molly will domesticate her yet!

And now the mild spat. I didn’t think he minded her sexual past. He lied, he lied! Ok, maybe not but that’s fun to say.

Aw, I like how you portrayed the aftermath of Harry’s floo call. Poor depressed Sirius.

Oo everyone acting weird. Foreshadowing, perhaps? To chapter 15, away!

Author's Response: I love writing a scrimgeour we can all hate. ^_^ he gets worse too.

I wanted to write in some person B jokes, but I decided against it.

*cough* emphasis on the 'for now'

I don't thinkshe'll win any blue ribbons for her cooking though, lol.

A lot of times people say they're ok with something until they're actually faced with it. Sexual history is usually one of those topics.

Thanks so much :D

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