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Review:dream_catcher says:
I finally had the chance to answer a review you gave me several months ago when you were offering to review on the forums, and I remembered I had never returned it. So here I am, better late than never, I guess!

I've been a fan of Draco/Hermione for a long time but don't usually read D/Hr one-shots because I find them rushed. This one, however, worked wonderfully. You did a great job of giving their history, both with the flashback and their thoughts.

This was also one of the first songfics I've read where the song lyrics actually added to the story. They went perfectly with your writing, giving the feeling of the music playing in the background of the dance. It also didn't feel like the plot was forced to fit around the lyrics - they blended together well.

All in all, I feel like you captured their characters and the struggle they would have with a relationship. I loved the twist of Ron helping them, which was very different than most D/Hr fics, and I loved the happy ending! Excellent job.

-Lane

Author's Response: Thank you Lane ^_^ Better late then never is absolutely correct ^_^ If you like the songfic idea, you'd probably like my newest ones where the lyrics are actually the dialogue ^_^ Thank you for the review

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