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Review:HauntedLyra22 says:
wow...really wow actually! are harry and heather going to be friends from now on? and also did this happen in you last version of this cos i dont remeber it happening, then again i dont remeber how many times a day i brush my teeth either...yeah so awesome i cant beive heather and kira's dad's a death eater, harsh that is...
rock on (you know you listen to too much evanescense when you penname is after on of their songs!)
-Wolf Girl

Author's Response: Harry and Heather will have a connection together but they won't be like best buddies like Harry is with Ron and Hermione or how Heather is with Isaac and Kira but a connect will be there I plan in the next chapter. This did not happen in my last version, in my last version Heather was in the hospital wing recovering from a Quidditch injury when she started to see the events through her fathers eyes-biological that is Ling Wong wasn't a death eater in the last version. This version obviously I put Heather strait in the scene and added Ling Wong to the picture because I always knew him as a prejudice character but I wanted to definite what side he was really on in the war. I definitely delved into what his psyche would be like and put a huge twist on it. It is harsh for Kira and Heather and a kind of wanted that so there would be that connection with Harry, plus I think Heather just seeing it didn't really get across what I wanted to give to the reader. Anyway I'm rambling lol Thanks for the review! lol (You know you’re a Lupin fan when your penname is related to him XD)

Much luv
Lupins_cub

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