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Review:kerricarri says:
A very vindictive character who's insanity was not as hysterically portrayed as I would've imagined it. But I think her insanity comes in the form of a cold ambition that her whole being was centered around and allowed nothing to sway her from the path she chose. Very focused, coldly so. But I admit, the detached style of the whole oneshot was slightly disappointing. As a first person account of a witch who had nothing left to lose and everything to gain from killing Hitler, I didn't expect such a sense of third person detachment in the...tone of the fic. However, this is understandable and I'm not going to rant and rave about this to you.

You, yourself, must consider this a personal piece. Having recently read "Night" by Elie Weisel, a Holocaust survivor, his cool detachment in his tone of writing actually infuriated me. "How can someone act so cool about these things?" I'd always wonder to myself, reading the atrocities he faced in the camps. Feeling annoyance at the author's deliberate detachment from the memories he tells in the book (which are terrible and why I know your research is accurate), I think...that people who survived such a thing can't help but recall those memories in such a way. In such a detached manner. It may not have been purposeful on your part, but I think the tone works, however much I want actual "emotional hysterics" inserted into the fic. However, it is the implications of the fic that make it "M" rated, where the "dark" aspect comes in. And for that, I don't think I can find real complaint in the tone not being "emotional" enough.

Although, I do like how you entwined the wizarding aspect into this fic. Being a witch would put a dent in anyone's religion, but she chooses to view it as a "gift," and I liked her small part in helping her fellow Jews in the camp. Religion doesn't exist at all in HP canon, and I like that you didn't dance about the topic. In fact, you gave this witch OC a major part--a Jew. Very vindictive towards the end of the fic, though, wasn't she? Especially when she tells the wizard guarding the door outside that the deed was "done." But also towards the end she seemed to ramble a little bit--then again, she only wanted to give Hitler his just deserts. Overall, an interestingly unique read with implications that aren't much explored in the fandom. Not particularly riveting, but it made me thoughtful because of said implications and allowed me to enjoy the small twists where the wizarding world made an appearance in the fic.

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