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Review:Andromedatonks says:
It is a lovely chapter, the little scene between Elise and Severus is cute, I loved the way you showed his awkwardness ("Just run away…no, no, don’t run away, you need your transfiguration essay." is just brilliant!) and her openness. She begins to remind me of some person I knew.

The only thing, I wish the scene in the Slytherin common room was more detailed and descriptive.. It kind of goes too fast, and it would be really great if you showed the atmosphere of the room... But it's just my small wish, more curiousity than anything else.

Great work!

Author's Response: You know, you're probably right. Often times, when I get caught up with the plot moving, I forget detailed descriptions. I might go in and edit that, thanks for catching it!

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