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Review:hpswimdummy693 says:
I'm actually not sure if I've ever reviewed your story, but I've been reading your story for quite some time. Absolutely lovely chapter might I say, as well as the others. It's entertaining, funny, and just so darn readable. You portray the characters well, for example: I find most stories neglect the character of Peter Pettigrew, (Mine as well. lol) making him out as if he is already seperating from the group and becoming a death eater. If they don't do that, they make him extremely jittery and idiotic and not really apart of the marauders. Yet, in your story, you incorporate Peter in the pranks, the conversations, etc. You make him out very much like I imagined him.

So, just keep it up with your fantasticness, and I hope to be reading your next chapter soon.

~Ema

Author's Response: It is always a battle with me to make Peter a marauder because i know what he becomes yet i have to write him as a friend to the people he basically kills. It breaks my heart. Truly. Thanks for the reviwe.

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