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Review:MajiKat says:
wow hunny, that was chilling.there is no other word for it! such a different portrayal of lily and james but a really good one! it worked with their characters and what makes them who they are.

i really liked the fight scenes at the end, and i loved the way you had lily use the killing curse without really thinking. that played well with the notion of innocence and motive, and her reactions afterwards were excellent - as were James'.

not a bad piece of darkness my love! well written and well described. you do such a great job with both these characters, and this is a situation i would never think to put them in, and i have never read a lily/james quiet like this one, so congratulations!!

james was a bit scary at times in this, but i think you show his darkness really efficiently.

well done!!
Maji xx

Happy you like the banner dear :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the banner, Maji! :D It's awesome! Very fitting too ;) Haha. Yeah, this one-shot was rather dark...I'm actually not very accustomed to writing this type of fanfic, but I decided to try my hand at it. It's a very interesting experience actually, especially when writing it during the night. Heh heh x) I think James is one of those characters that you can manipulate to fit your story plot. He can be wonderfully bright and cheerful, yet he can be rather sinister ;) The guy is awesome. Haha. And thanks once again!! Love ya tooooo :D

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