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Review:Elf_ears13 says:
Cat, this is amazing! Why doesn't this have as much attention as your other stories (though I'm sure they're worthy of the attention, too)? I love the mirror-river connection, though I probably would have continued on with it a bit more. It was more interesting to read than the dialog (at least to me), but I guess that was just your balance. I probably would have taken the connection too far. =P Druella was exactly what I'd imagine for Narcissa's mother, and I loved how she just calmly mentioned everything. Pressuring but not forcing - that was really fitting.

Some of your semi-colon sentences didn't make sense. Both halves should be able to stand on their own, so in cases like It was perfectly cut; not a bit out of proportion, a colon or comma would be more appropriate.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, Marisa! *huggle* This story is one I'm quite proud of, so I really love reviews like this :) With the mirror-river connection - well, I didn't want to overdo it, and I figured there's only so many times you can emphasize the similarites between mirrors and rivers without overdoing it :P I tried to balance out the dialogue and that - when I eventually go back and edit my stories though (one of these days, it'll happen) I'll keep that in mind. I'm also really glad you liked Druella - she was rather annoying to write for this, so I'm pleased she came off as believable :)


Thanks for mentioning that about the semi-colons! I'll definitely go back and fix that as soon as possible. Thanks for review, Marisa! ~Cat

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