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Review:HermyJane says:
Hmm. It was a cute story. Maybe it's because it's before we even met Hermione, but I felt like I was reading from the point of view of an OC. I doubt Hermione was such a tomboy, or that a single moment would change almost everything she is. Remember that she's eleven; I doubt she's hit puberty quite yet and that she would feel so much for a stranger. All in all, though, I liked it. It was cute and very fluffy. Keep writing!

Author's Response:
Thanks for such an honest review... actually Hermione date of birth is 19th September so she was nearly 12 the summer before Philosoher's Stone.

So I felt it was likely that she would notice Ron as a boy with amazing eyes...

And I didn't mean for it to appear that she liked him liked him... Just that there was a seed of liking... It was that she realised she was a girl and that was ok...

And she wanted to be his friend... explain why Ron's friendless comment hurt her so much...

and that she realised because she was muggle born she might have to work harder...

All in all, I agree with you, I like it as well!

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