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Review:Dark_One says:
Very cute, short, but cute. I really liked your idea and I think it’s cute, the way that they had this hidden love that no one else knew about, but I do have a few ideas about improvements, you need to slow the pacing down a bit, it’s very fast and seems to zoom through the story, you could have Draco and Hermione having flashback, maybe why he wants to dance, did they have a special dance, or a special song? You could also have some more information about how Ron feels, about how hurt he would have been, did he start to cry, did the scream? But overall I loved this story and I think that it is very sweet! 8/10

Author's Response: Thank you and yes it was nice their hidden love and thanks for all the ideas i will rewrite it with flashbacks and more about Ron. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Love and Peace

Lil lily71

p.s thanks for the 8/10

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