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Review:ChizzaLazty says:
On one hand, I really liked it. You really showed a lot of Neville's personality and it was interesting to read about him. You wrote him very well.

On the other hand, I'd like to see more action, more things that happened. More about his parents, not just what we already know about him. More about Neville, delving deeper into his character than you've already done. I felt there was something missing, you know, that thing that makes it amazing. Don't get me wrong, it was a very good fic, well written and I enjoyed it very much, it's just CC :)

But there are many good things about it too! I like the canon-ness it has to it, it seemed very realistic. The characterization of Neville's grandmother was also very good. I liked that you mentioned characters like the trio, Luna and Snape. It sort of brought it back to the real world for a moment, helped remember that there's a bigger story also.

Good luck with your other stories, seems like you've got your hands full!

Author's Response: Criticism!! Real third party opinions!! Whoo!! I knew it wasn't up to par but I needed some ideas pointed out to me. People don't seem to take me seriously when I say I want them to be as inhumanly harsh as possible. *shrugs*

I'll be doing some editing to it :D Thanks very much!!

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