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Review:chd1026 says:
Claire from the forums here!
Just one thing before I start: It's Ginevra, not Ginerva =]
"A shimmering tear, a cackle from the fire, a scribble of a quill, a drop of ink, all silent and unseen by all." Wow. Such an accurate description of loneliness in a single sentence. Very well written.
That was SO upsetting...but I really, really liked it. I'm a huge angst fan when it is well written, and this story definitely makes the cut.
The mood was incredibly intense, and it lasted throughout the story.
This is awesome, "Her scarlet hair fell like a curtain, shielding one half of her face from the cold, dark world that had become her life." Nice metaphor!
I loved the symbolism you used with the book. Leaving it open...because there is still some much left to be written about her life, and the invisible ink...because somehow, no matter what, she will always be lonely.
The only thing that could have been clearer were the spots when the story changes from Ginny to Harry. The first time I read that section, I was a little confused about the sudden change in setting.
Besides that and the Generva thing, this story was flawless. Fantastic writing and should be very proud!
Adding this to my favorites =]

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! And... wow, I totally didn't know I misspelled her name. -blush- Thanks for pointing that out.

Flawless, really? Hehe, thanks so much!
And a favorite? Haha, this really is my day!

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