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Review:chd1026 says:
Hey there!
Well that was horribly sad...but a very sweet idea all the same.
I love the imagery you use...like the nightgown fluttering around her ankles.
I also think that you could highly benefit from a beta. There a a few typos and grammatical errors that interrupt the flow and mood of the story, such as "dark Lord" instead of Dark Lord and "none-existent" instead of non-existent, and a beta could clean it right up. It's such a nice piece, and when perfected if could be really amazing.
This is gorgeous, "Her body shuddered and she shivered in the cold midnight air. Finally, after so many hours, a single tear welled up in her eye, and then, poised; it fell from her lid, suspended in the air it dropped with a certain finality and grace, upon the end page of her diary, leaving a mark of sadness upon its page. Hermione cried a single tear for Harry." It’s just a perfect way to describe her pent-up emotion...so visual. Great work!
I'm not a Harry/Hermione fan at all, but this story sort of allowed me to forget that...
Overall, fantastic work...You should be proud of it!
xxx

Author's Response: Thankyou so much for your advice and CC and I shall certainly take it to heart! - I have been saying for a long time that I want to get a beta reader, I think after I finish up these stories that I need to get out of the way I will do it, I have an imense workload and bit off a little more than I can chew in terms of the fact that before I was finished one story I jumped to the next and am now juggling three lol. Anyways I will certainly get around to it soon, and thankyou for complimenting that line; I was hopeing it would have that affect on people. Once again thankyou for reading- and (more of a fan question towards you) do you plan on putting up the next chapter of your story soon? *laughs* I really love it! anyways thanks for the review! =)

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