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Review:ginnyweasley20 says:
it's good so far, i am planning on reading the rest. a couple of tips, do watch your grammar, you have a lot of typos but i could still make out what you were saying easily. and also remember that earlier on in this chapter you stated they were to go Hogsmeade to get her stuff but then threw in the adventure as if they had travelled to Diagon Alley instead. don't forget that Gringotts, Ollivanders, Flourish and Blotts, and the Leaky Cauldron are in Diagon Alley, not Hogsmeade. but it's definitely a good story, i want to more but it's 3:35Am where i am and i should be getting to bed soon.

Author's Response: Thank! I'm currently having the story beta-read, as it wasn't before. So I hope I'll get all those little problems taken care of. I could have sworn I changed the Hogsemeade thing though... I had made the mistake during writing and it had been pointed out... hmmm.. going to change it now hehe. Very odd... lol. Thanks so much for r/r!!!

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