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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
I had some thought in the first half of the chapter about what I was going to say, but I forgot because it was such a good read... But there were other things I still remember. I'm not quite sure about how old the people are in this fic, but I found it a bit unlikely that Sirius would go at that age to some kind of brothel and that there would be one at Hogsmeade. Don't get me wrong, it doesn't particularly bother me, but I just found it unlikely.

One thing though was that at one point I completely forgot that the two other girls were there too. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but anyway...

After that I have to say that I still really liked this chapter. I liked especially the end where they talked about their aliances and who Sirius should support or pretend to. It's quite realistically written how the boys think about the war and wonder what they should do, and especially that they really are afraid.
I hope I made some sence...
-Annina

Author's Response: Very behind on reviews (again) but wanted to drop a note before I forgot what I was thinking! I think you are probably right about Sirius and his activities but (there's always one) I considered him similiar to a Navy Sailor (my husband is one so I speak from experience!) and Hogsmeade, at the time, his port of call, so to speak. It was where he ran to to try and get away from the things plaquing him. This is further developed later on with a conversation with Lily so hopefully, it will make more sense to you when you reach that point (if you keep reading anyway!) It was pointless about the two girls...they were just there to show it was a "group" outing and to negate any "James/Lily" questions people may have had early on in the story. People were worried that this was all behind James' back and I wanted to clear that up by having a girl there for him. That's why they only received a brief mention.

I'm so glad you are enjoying this, I'm definetly loving all of your wonderful reviews! You make me think about things that I haven't in awhile and it makes me love this story all over again. And I love that you are turning into a Sirius/Lily shipper!!! Welcome to the dark side! :D


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