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Review:chd1026 says:
So Ronnie's a decendent of Gryffindor? That's pretty tight!
"I said by to Jack" it should either be 'bye' or 'goodbye'
Once again, I think that your story would be eons better if you found a beta to catch all those little errors.
Just a question: Why are they talking about the sizes of their hoosawhatsees? They're eleven... I don't know, it just seems a bit early for them to be interested in that sort of stuff. Hehehe
I'm excited to see where this story goes...
Keep writing and perfecting your technique, because you have great potential.

Author's Response: not exactly, it might seem like Ronnie is the the descendant, but its not exactly correct. Ryan is a little big for his britches, if you know what i mean, and even though they are eleven, he tries to act like he is older, you will see a difference between him and the other characters, like how he already has a "girlfriend". thanks for the review again!

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