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Review:andromeda says:
No reason to rip this one apart! lol. Don't be so hard on yourself.
Nice descripitons and sensitive character analysis. It's refreshing to read a story about Neville, there don't seem to be as many of those.
I would try adding a little more action next time, even if it is a one-shot.
In general, I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you did!

Action? Action... Okay, where could there be more action? That's why Lockhart makes an appearance, it was rather dull without him. After careful consideration of more action inclusion, I must confess that I am at a loss :) Any suggestions on expanding the action in this story?

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