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Review:RupertsPheonix says:
Well, this story definitely has potential. =) It's a really cute idea.

A few tips:
1] Watch using the words "two," "to," and "too." You sometimes mix them up.
2] Watch using "well" where you mean "while."
3] Start a new paragraph everytime a new person speaks. Lily's and James' dialogue should not be in the same paragraph.

My favourite lines of this chapter:
"Sarah (No nickname available)"
"Sirius thought that this was a necessary part of the letter."
"'When’s the wedding?'"

Good start, and I look forward to an update! =)


Author's Response: Thanks for the tips. I didn't do a good job of editing b/c I just wanted to get the chapter up. I'll watch out for that next time.

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