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Review:Tonks_girl_4eva says:
i like the idea of this, can't wait for more. i think it is a little too short though and i think you could go into more detail in some areas. specifically, when Mrs Weasley goes and looks at the clock, i think, as a mother, she would show more anguish for her sons than an ashened face.
i also have a tiny nitpick:
"I said that you shouldn't your owls before they hatch."
it should be:
"I said that you shouldn't COUNT your owls before they hatch"
I do like how you portrayed George reacting to Fred's death, it is exactly how i think one would react to their twin's death. I particularly like the paragraph that depicted the Muggle police finding the bodies, it portrayed the impact of George's death excellently.
Anyway, i'm looking forward to reading more of this series.

Author's Response: Whups, hehe, yes you had it right at "count". This is the most indepth review I've gotten. That means you get a cookie!

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