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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
Oh, you gotta love it. Best friend's overanalyzing things, boring you to death. You know you have to listen, but it's easier to just convince them to talk about something else. Except, I don't think that a friend ever misinterpreted me . . . Oh, that coule mean drama, drama is fun.

Just like your other story (Collide) I love the way you're writing this and the characters. Flawed, quirky, being stuck up for even when you didn't ask. It's a truthful type of writing. You write it how it is, exaggerating the situation where needed, likewise playing it down when needed.

My one criticism is that you're rushing. A few things are going unexplained, like Ryan's hatred, and I'd still sort of like to know what happens. And the fight scene, I would have dragged it out a bit more. Not the point of telling it detail by detail, but maybe a little more of the blind rage and emotion going on, or just the smaller details, or something.

Again, I absolutely have to comment on your song/band choice for the lyrics. Love Fall Out Boy.

Author's Response: me tooo=]]

i appreciate the honesty, really, but i am just a stubborn freak. i had a chapter outline and i stuck to it, i guess, but loll thanks again.

falloutboy is amazingamazingAMAZING.


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