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Review:HarryPotter is my LIFE says:
Oo, I like bad Lily. I kind of like her this way, gives room for her to grow as a character; and creates conflict. Yeah. XD

My only critism is that you may have jumped into plot action too fast. I would have liked to know a bit more about Ryan before he cheated on Cara, just to have a little more background, because when I read it, I didn't really feel any hatred, because I couldn't tell what really might have gone on.

On the other hand, I love Cara. She's quirky, crazy, and better friends with the guys that the girls. Just today . . . Well, I won't get into that and bore you, but when you can hang out with guys without being disgustingly obnoxious and flirty, especially when you already have a boyfriend, it's a good thing.

Oh, and one more thing; I absolutely had to comment about how much I love Paramore.

Author's Response: not to brag but

now that i have name dropped and bragged enough

thanks alot. and - i wanted ryan ot be dropped quick, i wanted readers to form their own opinions throughout the series.

itll be important lol.

thanks againnn=]

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