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Review:Broken_Innocence says:
I loved the question at the end. It really grabbed the audience's attention and made them think. You may ask why I have only reviewed the last chapter...well mostly because I like telling authors how they have improved over the story. You for instance it seems you have become a lot more confident and comfortable with your subject which comes across in the flow of your writing. It was never hard to read but the chapters seemed to flow alot easier as the story progressed. You st definent idiosyncrasies about your characters which was good and it gave the audience a bit of knowledge about what the character was about. Your story and plot is fantastic and you must have put alot of work into it because it is really shining. I would suggest maybe putting a line between dialogue and descriptions just to break it up but that is my only suggestion. otherwise congrats.

Author's Response: I'm sorry I'm a bit delayed in replying to this. I've had a lot to catch up with in my writing and what's going on. I don't mind that you've only reviewed the last chapter, in fact, it doesn't bother me - it makes me happy! I'm so happy for your review, and I'll take all of your advice to heart, you offered it greatly and I appreciate it! Thanks for your review and your time spent reading this, I hope to get chapter ten up soon! Thanks A Lot, Broken Innocence!

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