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Review:DarkFaerii says:
...and so the plot thickens. What's the bet that she returns home to find the little boy gone and the place trashed? *casually throws dart at picture of Draco's head* He's such a dirtbag...although, the suspense is kinda killing me...WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED to him? I have some theories, all of which involve Voldemort's wrath. Either that, or he tried to swindle someone out of some money. :) I vote option #2 xD
Interesting that the 'Golden Triro' invited her into their ranks so easily... GO LUPIN!!! Always the one to offer emotional support...
Bah..must you leave us hanging...!? that just ain't fair. At all. Meanie. xD the only advice I can give here, is that when Lucia is in her flat tending Draco, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENS TO ASHER?!...he makes an appearance at the beginning, and at the end of the scene...he seems awfully polite and well..."cultured" for someone his age...anyone I know, would want to be in the middle of everything...he wouldn't be sitting quietly twiddling his thumbs. He would WANT to be in the room with his uncle...(people tend to cling to familiar things when in unfamiliar surroundings) and would ask waaay too many questions. lol. okay. I'm done. Nice work here xD...(out of the elements, I think water would be best suited for that may be the way you want to go)

Author's Response: Hmmm. . . I hadn't planned on the elements appearing yet, but I'll consider it. . . *scratches head*
Patience, my dear friend, patience. I'll give you a hint on what happened to Draco: It involves both Voldemort and Asher. Although, the money idea is a good one. ^_^
Speaking of Asher, I considered making him more "clingy," as you put it; but he kind of was in Chapter 2 because he was worried that his uncle would die. Now that Lucia is taking care of him, though, he can worry about his own things--which, as we'll find out LATER, is a lot. As for being cultured, what can you expect when one of your parents is a Malfoy?? *grimaces at the thought*
If the suspense is killing you, I apologize. I just meant it to hurt a teeny weeny bit! >_< I probably won't update until the songfic is done, though. Meh.
Thanks for reviewing! RN

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