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Review:Concerned but hopeful Legacies fan says:
As much as I like the idea of Harry training in monastic solitude, I don't think you stayed true to the characters. In his interactions with his aunt and uncle and in his interior monologue, Harry doesn't sound like himself. I think in general you have the characters taking themselves too seriously. Harry has never thought about himself or his task in such epic terms, and that talk with Petunia didn't seem genuine either.

All that said, Harry's training does show that he is buckling down and taking things more seriously, which is appropriate, given Dumbledore's death.

I also like the start of the plot you're cultivating with Snape.

I'm a huge fan of your Legacies series, and I know better than to write off a fic after only one chapter (particularly since you're the author), but these incontinuities with the canon characters does make it hard to get into it.

Best of luck. I've still got faith in you.

Author's Response: This fic is nowhere from finished. The intro may come across a bit different, because if i wer ein his situation i'd be pretty antagonistic and scared as well, and would try to clutch to any idea that even gives me a glimer of hope...thats why he's so focused on this scroll...

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