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Review:DarkFaerii says:
OOohhh...elemental magic...awesome!!
Does the word 'angst' mean anything to you? :) Lucia is a good character, although you have to be careful about making her a Mary-Sue...that happens to so many good characters it's sad.
*refuses the urge to 'SQUEEE' profusely* This is a VERY promising beginning. VERY. I am guessing that the elemental magic has more uses that just calming yourself down...cant wait to see what you cook up. Play to the strengths of each element, if they CAN be used separately...give them personalities...if you catch my drift.
I like how you give the impression that the elements are wild and uncontrollable...keep that there.
...I HATE it when good characters are killed off. Sure it adds dimension to the story...but it is still VERY VERY VERY sad. *cries* Her Dad was like a typical Dad...and grief leads to being overdramatic. *sighs*
*shakes head* ANYWAY...THE NEXT CHAPTER AWAITS!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice! I'll keep the elemental suggestions in mind. No, I don't know what the word "angst" means. . . I'll look it up later. . . ^_^
And don't worry, Lucia definitely does not qualify as a Mary-Sue! RN


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