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Review:evilrubberducky says:
Before I begin, I just have to say that I'm glad you asked me to review this, since I am not only a big historian and Tudor fan, but Anne Boleyn is my role-model. And the beginning graphic is gorgeous! But now on to my review: when I give a review, I like to give one good thing, and then CC, one good thing, then CC, exc.

Good- The idea is very creative, and as stated before I am a big fan of this era.

CC-“Royal in what way" should have a question mark at the end, not a period, and the part where Elizabeth says
Then, ten years ago on two days before what the Boleyn’s had dubbed as my birthday" it should be Boleyns'. Very minor things, but I am a grammar freak. Pity I can't pick it up in my own stories.

Good Thing- Elizabeth is a very believable charector

CC- In this time period, people usually called their parents 'Mother' and 'Father' not 'mum' and 'dad'. People were more formal then. You did this in the second half, but not the first.

Good thing- good idea with the Love Potion... And the ending sentence was very interesting. Made me crave for more.

I'll try to read the next chapter when I get the chance, and I put it in my favorites so I'll remember it. Also, since I reviewed your story, would you mind r&ring for me?


Good thing-

Author's Response: Of course I'll review yours Regina!!! (I've already favorited 'Expressway to the Couch'...It looks fantastic!) I'll probably have time in the next few days...when my homework load is slightly less...

I think I remember putting a period at the end of "Royal in what way" because it was less of a question and more of a statement. Perhaps after rereading this, I'll change it once the new chapter images are up! I'll definitely fix that apostrophe...I'm generally pretty good with grammar so I'm surprised that I missed that one! I think the changes to Mum and Dad are in the validation line now...If not, they'll be going in ASAP!

The love potion is such a critical prop in this story...It's so useful with the next few chapters that you'll see. It's mentioned every other chapter or so and the effects of Elizabeth's actions have such acute reactions, ah, it's so fun to write magic into history!

I'm glad you liked it and I'm looking forward to getting your reviews!

xxCornie


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