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Review:evilrubberducky says:
Hello, I said I would review, so here I am. When I review, I like to first start out with a good thing, give CC critisism, give a good thing, and exc.

Good- Very nice start. It caught my interest, and made me keep reading.

CC- this isn't really that big of a deal, and probably most people won't mind, but in the first paragraph instead of "Harry!!" It might be better, and look more proffesional, if you had "HARRY!" It means the same thing, and two of the same punctuation mark tend to annoy me.

Good- Very good on the wands connecting thing. Most people, myself included, seem to forget about the whole graveyard scene in the 4th book. Goof memory, and I could tell that you knew your Harry Potter books through and through, which always makes me like a story/author more.

And since I reviewed your story, you wouldn't mind giving me one, would you?

Author's Response: Hey friend! Thanks for reviewing! I like your Good/CC method! And I see what you mean about repeated punctuation marks. I specifically looked in my re-reading of HP5 last night and noticed JK makes capitals rather than double exclaimation points. Perhaps I'll change that!

Glad you liked the wands connecting; it always sticks out to me. (o: Thanks again, and I did return your review, hope it was adequate!

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