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Review:evilrubberducky says:
Hello. I said I would review, so here I am. In my reviews I like to give something you did right, some CC, something you did right, and so on so forth.

Good- you used the term 'Mum' in the flashback! I can't tell you how many times I've seen mom, so this was a relief

CC- Instead of Platform 93/4 it should be platform 9 and 3/4. The other way makes it look as if you are saying platform ninety-three quarters.

Good- you could tell the girls were good friends, and you had thought the relationship out a lot

CC- the girls seemed a bit Mary-Sueish. I mean, perfect looking, and the most beautiful girls in school. However, it is your first fic, and I can't tell you how horrible my Mary-Sue was in my first fic. *shudders at the memory*

Good- spelling and punctuation was right, and even though the cliff-hanger was a bit obvious, it was a good way to end the chapter.

Hope my CC wasn't too harsh. I know sometimes it's hard to hear it. I'll try to review the next chapter when I get the chance. And if you wouldn't mind r&ring my fics, that would be nice too.
Regina

Author's Response: Argh, the 93/4 thing...I thought the 3/4 would become all little and fraction-y, but they didn't. I will definitely go back and change that. Yeah the girls may seem perfect, but they are far from it, don't worry! Don't worry about the CC, it really wasn't that harsh and was really helpful. Lying and telling me the fic was perfect, doesn't help me improve and I want to improve. I will definitely check out your fics when I have the time (this weekend??), especially since I try to review all of my reviewers. I am a bit behind right now and as the (school) quarter's ending I am swamped with work, but I will do my best. Thanks for reviewing!

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