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Review:a_shooting_star says:
Aw, that was absolutely adorable :]] I think you had Hermione in character very well and I loved Ron in the story ;]] The way he shouted at her that he loved her made me smile.

Just a bit of advice; you could help it but putting a space between the lines ;] It just improves readability. I really liked the last line; The kiss only lasted a few seconds, but it felt like eternity to me. An eternity of bliss. -it was a lovely way to end it! Good job :D

Author's Response: Thanx for the review! I'm glad you liked the story. The ending I believe was the best part. I'll keep up with my spacing, too!

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