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Review:CJ_Black says:
I simply love your style - it's so natural and simple, and I enjoy reading this story a lot. Once again, small remarks upon Snape bring him even closer to what I envisioned. Then it comes - Lily. The one character I've always loathed (well, maybe except Peter). I loved her portrayal here (I don't let my feelings get in the wa of objectivity), I think you pulled off a great character, even if it wasn't much developed. But let's go back to Snape. He is easily one of the best Snapes out there, the exact same way I pictured him. Nether good nor evil, but simply doing whatever is in his best advantage. He wants knowledge and power, independence, and he does everything he can to achieve them. Spectacular portrait, awsome descriptions, very good chapter. Can't wait to read the last one.

Author's Response: At first I thought I would be unable to write a believable Snape and I would hate to write him. I was wrong. Especially about the second statement. The first... I entertained doubts till I was told my Snape was fine. lol. Yes, my Snape discovered one can't have too much power and independence when one serves a dark lord. Dark lords are jealous of their powers. They don't share. lol. I'm glad you like my Snape. I know most people like to read him as a romantic character. I don't write him like that. But I think I'm showing more of his human side in another fic...

Lily... She's one of my favorite characters, I must admit it. She's so mysterious. We don't know much about her. I've always imagined her like Ginny is characterized in the books: gutsy, brave, smart, loyal and powerful. Oh, well, everyone is entitled to their opinion. lol.

Thanks a lot for the review. ~Anne


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