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Review:CJ_Black says:
Another spectacular chapter! I loved it. The bit about Aberforth's reputation in the beginning was very funny - you are very talented with subtle humor. Also, I loved your portrayal of Trelawney. You stucked to the canon, but made a very good job of her. Again, the humor shows up with the comment upon her "Inner Eye" and when she says "I know you're going to sit down". The transition between humor and angst/drama/action is very well dne and very naturally flowing. When describing Snape, you did an amazingly good job as well - wonderful portrait and very close to my perception of him, of course :) I loved this chapter as well, and I'm off to read the next. Much love, CJ [Black Kitty]

Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't resist using that bit of information given to us by JKR - through Albus - about Aberforth.
As for the portrayal of the characters, I must admit that I wrote that fic at a time I was re-reading the books, and I had not read any fanfics yet, so I guess it helped me write them in character. Trelawney is annoying sometimes, but she's not a bad person. She's a fraud when she tries consciously to make a divination, but she's a real seer. As for Snape, I would never have thought I would be able to write him. But he's such a useful character in some situations. So even if I don't like him, I like the character. I'm glad you like the way I read him in the books.
Thanks for the review! :D

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