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Review:LaDorki says:
I adored this chapter. I don't read about Molly often, but I very much like the voice you've given her. And this entire recap... it puts everything that's happened into perspective, doesn't it? But I've thought once before and was reminded again in this chapter about Percy. Where is he? Did I just miss that bit, or has he been left out? I've been so focused on Harry and Hermione, I can't remember if you've mentioned him. Anyway. Lovely chapter, although I caught a few grammatical errors. Do you have a beta? Your grammar and punctuation is already pretty good, but a second opinion would polish this up, you know what I mean? Your writing is beautiful, and the few little mistakes are sometimes distracting from it. Just a suggestion, of course. =)

Author's Response: This was also one of my favorite chapters to write. I don't read Molly often either. I'm not sure why I did this chapter, this way... I think the story just sort of dictates itself, and this is what it called for...

Nothing like a Mother's sorrow to help you see the depth of everything. Ah, yes, you picked up on Percy. A few others did too. Well, see, he was sort of Iffy as to what side he was on, if he was going to come back to the family, etc. So they didn't know what happened to him, and ended up just hoping for the best, and leaving things unsaid for fear of what the truth might bring.. But you found out next chapter about Percy.. (o:

Grammatical errors? I do try my best! I have a scene-beta who sorta previews things for me and we bounce around ideas, but he doesn't do grammar/etc. I do all the grammar/etc beta-ing myself, so to speak. I tried to get a beta for that, but they were all like 13 years old, so I decided to do it myself. I am sorry for the mistakes though, I do try my absolute best to catch them all!

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