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Review:LaDorki says:
I love your version of Harry. I don't enjoy other people's Harrys too often, either. Just Rowling's, really. So really good job, there. The difference between his conversation with Ginny and Hermione is dramatic and telling of his feelings, entirely. You can see that everything is different for him, because he experienced things with Hermione and not Ginny. It's sad that she can't understand that, but then again at a time like this I'm sure she'd be looking for anything to be sad about other than her brothers, you know? It's a really complicated situation, when you think about it, but you've presented it beautifully. Other than a few errors here and there, this chapter was absolutely wonderful. I'm really enjoying this fic. =)

Author's Response: You love my Harry? *dances* I was really going for realistic and proper characterization. I don't really enjoy Harry, Hermione, or Ron if people don't write them with good characterization. I don't think my Harry is quite the right JKR Harry, but I've tried my best to preserve him, and grow him where he would realistically grow...

Yes, it's unavoidable that Harry's relationship with Hermione and his with Ginny are going to be drastically different now. It's not like he doesn't care about Ginny, or that he's in love with Hermione or anything like that. It's a matter of Ginny not really being able to understand who he is now, but Hermione can. She was there, and she's been changed and affected too. And try as Ginny may, she can never quite understand. Sad, but this happens a lot in life. There are some things others can't understand without having been there. Those who've been there have stronger bonds because they understand...

Yes, you're very right that Ginny would be looking for anything to be sad about besides her brothers. It's a tough situation, and something Harry will continue to blame himself for, too. Poor kids.

Hehe, I'm glad that no matter how many kind words you say, you still pick up on a few errors (which I'm curious to know what they are!!) I read my chapters about 10 times before I post them, so if I miss something, then I'm utterly hopeless in seeing it! Anyway, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!!


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