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Review:LaDorki says:
The opening to this chapter was just what I was looking for from Arthur! Forget everything I said before. I got what I felt was missing from the beginning. It was just enough to catch a glimpse of his sorrow. Nicely done.

This chapter is another intense one. It's the only word I can think to describe everything so far. Your writing is well paced and lingers long enough to give the full effect, not so long that it's lagging. And the emotional descriptions kill me every time. Those descriptions connect the reader to character so well, and I love it. It's full of depth. I'm lost for any other words. Characterisation was lovely, writing was lovely, everything is top notch.

Author's Response: Finally we see Arthur's grief. (o: But I'm glad it's something you were picking up on, something missing. I don't really go for tunnel-vision stories where we ignore everything else besides the two or three main people.

Intense? I like intense, I'll take that. (o: I'm glad it's well paced. I was worried that it would drag, that readers would feel it was moving so slowly or that nothing was happening. I do hope the pacing remains adequate.

Thanks so much for continuing to review all the chapters!

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