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Review:LaDorki says:
The change in Harry and Hermione is really powerful in this chapter. Astounding, really, how you have changed these characters almost in full, yet you have done it in a way that I find fully believable. There's out of character, and then there is a growing character. You've certainly achieved the latter, and for that I must commend you. Wonderful characterisation here. I got lost in it more than once and forgot to notice the other things going on.

Again, though, I would've liked to see more of Arthur's thoughts. What you've written here is wonderful, but it's still missing something. That doesn't mean that he has to cry or have an outburst, but just... I don't know, that extra something the emphasize his sadness, you know? I'm really enjoying this fic so far, though. Really wonderful, emotional writing. Just the kind I like. =)

Author's Response: *beams at your wonderful words again!* Harry and Hermione - growing characters?! Ah, I'm delighted to hear. I was anxious about this, because I was afraid people would feel that they were out of character, but the problem was - they had changed. It was impossible to suffer what they went through and *not* be affected. They have changed in huge ways. I'm glad you see them as growing characters. I'm so happy to hear that!!

Arthur's thoughts are coming, as you already found out. The glimpses of other's emotions sort of get sprinkled in there...

You like emotional writing? I think that's what I like writing... Never could really write anything comedic. I go for the emotions I think. (o:

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