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Review:LaDorki says:
Oh, ache. My heart hurts from this chapter. So much sadness, so much desperation. Okay, let's start from the beginning.

Opening scene. Oh wow. The description is chilling, but lovely in that it establishes an emotional connection to the reader early on. Good work, there, definitely. I'm so sad for Ron. I do love that character. *sigh* But at the same time, so relieved for Harry. You had me holding my breath for a second there; I was so sure he was done for. You certainly know how to put a fan on the edge of their seat. =)

All this scar business is interesting, and I'm curious to see where that goes next. I think I would have liked to see a little more of Mr. Weasley's grief, and there were a few grammatical errors here and there, but overall the chapter was good. Really intense, and very enjoyable aside from its sorrowful contents.

Author's Response: *smiles* I really appreciate your kind words about these chapters. And yes, this chapter is particularly sad. They sort of stay sad for quite awhile. The story establishes an emotional connection to the reader? What wonderful words to hear! This is meant to be an emotional fic, so it's neccessary that the reader be drawn into it...

I do love Ron's character as well. I hated him dying, but that's what the story called for... You thought I'd kill off Harry too? Well, the poor bloke lived, but I'm not sure if he's happy about that...

Yes, there are lots of scars, and probably to the disappointment of my readers, I'm not following the story of the scars (though there is one...) The story is about the internal scarring, not so much the external ones. But they make their appearances.

I think you found Mr. Weasley's grief already. Just a couple more chapters on. Each of the characters are grieving, but the story will mainly focus on Harry, and Hermione too. But we'll get glimpses of the other characters... (o:

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