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Review:LaDorki says:
Oooh, lovely lovely. How did I know that spare room would come in handy? ;) Oh, Charlie. The poor boy. He's been holding back for far too long, I think. *gigglefit*

But yes, in all seriousness. I've yet to mention this in the last few chapters, but I thought I'd tell you I like the pace of this story. It's very quick - important event to important event - and normally I would find this jerky and rushed, but for this fic it seems like it's important to do it that way, and you've done it well. Plus, if you wrote every scene between the big scenes, you'd have an extremely long fic. =) I loved that you put Luna in this chapter and her usual quirkiness. I have a soft spot for her, so I was happy to see her. You wrote her well. Molly and Arthur were also written well. I'll be keeping up with this fic as you add to it, you've got me very curious about where it goes from here. =)

Author's Response: It was obvious the spare room would come in handy that way, wasn't it? lol. Now, you're so right... Charlie, poor boy - but I swear I don't like torturing my character!

Seriously, I'm glad you like the pace of this story and that you know why I don't write everything in between the scenes. It would be really boring for the readers if I did anyway.

You really think I wrote Luna well? Wow! I would never have thought I could do that. *does a happy little dance* I love her too. She's such a good and loyal girl in spite of her quirkiness. It's the first time also that I've been writing Molly and Arthur.

Thanks a lot for the reviews! And I know I haven't written Harry and Ginny that much till now, but they are going to have a few scenes. ;)

Anne


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