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Review:LaDorki says:
Oooho, I did like this chapter very much! =D It was very much my kind of chapter - only one break! Ah, and I'm so excited now, to see what happens next. Well, we KNOW what's going happen next, obviously, but... you know what I mean. =) Charlie is a sly one. I'm glad he and Hermione are going to be closer together. Oh my, oh my!

I remember my one concrit (I'd forgotten any others I may have had in my excitement =P), and that was about Harry and Ginny. Oooh, their characterisation, I've noticed over the last few chapters, is a bit... Hmm. Well, it's just not exactly my favourite. I'm not sure exactly what it is. Every time they pop up, they're kind of in and out, you know? I'd like to see a conversation where they're more talkative and we can see more of them as well.

But this chapter is very exciting and I enjoyed reading it very much. And I love your Charlie in this particular piece. =D

Author's Response: Yes, Charlie is a sly one. hehe. Or maybe he is just a good and loyal brother. I knew as I was writing it that what was going to happen was very obvious. lol.

Harry and Ginny... You will see more of them soon. it's true that at the exception of the scene at the Burrow, I haven't given them a real scene.

I'm glad you likes my Charlie. I'm trying to do my best - we don't know much about him. Again, thanks very much for reviewing. :D


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