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Review:LaDorki says:
What I especially liked about this chapter was the clear difference between Charlie and Ron. Not in your physical description, but in the way they acted. Charlie is mature enough for Hermione, I think, whereas Ron was so much easier to argue with. It was subtle, but it was there. =)

I'm surprised at your Molly in the last bit. She knows her baby - her only girl! - is spending the night with boys, and she's just... happy? I understand, Harry and Ginny are in love and all, but from a mother's point of view, that might be a little too much for a girl Ginny's age. That's how I see Molly, anyway. *shrug*

Overall, this is a good chapter. Not quite as intense as the others, but still good. The grammatical errors were prominent; I picked out a fair amount of them. Still, it was enjoyable and I'll definitely keep reading. =D

Author's Response: There is definitely a difference between Ron and Charlie, and I wanted to show that. I'm glad you caught that. :)

Molly. She wouldn't have been happy if she had known that Ginny and Harry had had sex. But as I see Molly - a mother who knows everything about her children, even if they try very hard to hide it from her - she knows they just sleep in the same bed. And when I said "her children", since she considers Harry as her own, somehow, she knows he didn't do anything she would disapprove. So she's quite satisfied with that.

As soon as I have some time, I'll open my grammar book again and try to correct my grammatical errors... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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