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Review:loony86 says:
Alastor, clueless?! *gasps* That once and for all showed me just how serious the situation was. And no, I'm not joking here. Or maybe I have too much confidence in Alastor's abilities and knowledge...

All in all, a nice little story that really brings some light into the events we only learn about one by one in canon. The way you brought Regulus into the plot was... interesting. I always figured Severus would have told Voldemort about the prophecy and not turned to "the good side" until some time later but I guess that's open to interpretation.

I haven't looked closely at the reviews you already got but I bet juls (I saw she read it) was incredibly happy with your version of Severus. And so am I even though my own Severus always turns out to be more... noble... more Albus-like... but that's not canon, and I think that once I stop admiring him, your version is the better one. ;)

I really enjoyed your story! =)

Author's Response: I guess they all were clueless. Even Alastor. But CONSTANT VIGILANCE! lol.

Actually, I know a couple of people who believe Severus was never a true Death Eater. That he's always been Albus's spy. I don't know... It's possible, of course. One thing I'm sure of is that Albus would never have given him a job at Hogwarts if Sevy wasn't on his side. And in OoP, Sevy told Umbridge he'd been teaching at Hogwarts for 14 years.

Ah, yes, Severus. Yes, Juls liked/s the way I wrote him in this fic and the way I'm writing him in Two Lives. I like that character the way he is in the books. So I try to write him that way, and yet as a human being.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! Thanks for reading, and for your wonderful reviews, loony. *hugs*

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