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Review:Dracana says:
What do I think? Amazing, wonderful, absolutely gorgeous . . . no words can decribe how much I love this. The whole little trilogy is my favourite, especially as I know that Ryan is the influence upon the whole appearance of the OC. I love the way you make his personality so deep and powerful, so extrodinarily beautiful. I can feel a buzzing connection to him and I'm jealous of Hermione, because I want this stunning disaster myself.

"Blackness tints my mind as I feel myself falling into warm, dark oblivion and I wonder if you will catch me… " To sum up all of the lines I loved, I would have to include the whole story!! Looking at your earlier fics and then this one, I can see how much you have improved - you write your words with such passion and delicacy that they are almost poetic and lyrical. You know that description is what I love most, and so I must congratulate you on your elegant usage of it, and especially the lack of dialogue - it marks the sign of a developed writer. Your progress is visionable and remarkable to see. I truely respect you as a talented author.

I love this whole plot, and so want to pirate it . . . but that would be mean. Dare I ask to write something similiar, but as a novella, dedicated soley to you for your fantastic efforts and marked as "inspired by the oh-so-amazing Canadian Dreamer"? Perhaps I shouldn't dare to ask . . . after all, this is a unique little trillogy of your own.

Well, over all - utterly fantastic, a purely satisfying ending to an honest, raw series that captures your reader's mind and imagination, and is mastered with skill and excellancy. Well done, this is joining my list of favourites. You are amazing!! I'm just sad to see that its all over, but thrilled that it was so incredulously stunning.

xx


Author's Response: I am speechless from this amazing review Helen!! You just made my day, this is the best review I have ever gotten and it means so much coming from you!! I love my nameless OC, he is everything I love: vounerable, not afraid to show emotion, beautifull in a fragile way...

I like that sentance as well :D
I too believe that my writing has improved and it really makes me happy that my work can meen something to someone

OOoo i like poetic and lyrical hehehe *blushes* I am loving description at the moment lol

I am so honoured that you think I am talented, it really means so much to me. I acn't even describe it.

I think it would be fine for you to write something similar...but I have a challenge for you hehe, make it a girl OC haha (becuase you hardly EVER do that)
hehe just make sure you direct them to my stories ;)

This review truley took my breath away and brought a smile to my lips


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