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Review:Rosalie Cullen says:
This was really good! I loved it. I think that this is an interesting twist on things. It looks and sounds promising. I like the fact that Lily and James are best friends. I wonder what happened to make Lily hate him? Sirius and James's meeting will be fun to read, but will they instantly hit is off? Remus is my 3rd favorite character, so I am looking foward to seeing him. But how will James and Sirius find out about his 'fury little problem'? James is my all time favorite character, so I hope that I see a lot of him. My only objection is that Peter *eyes narrow* has to be in it. Grrr. I HATE Peter so much that it makes my blood boil. Could you have him disappear and not show up at all in the story? If you have to have him, would it be at all possible if you wouldn't focus on him, and only mention him briefly? *puppy dog eyes* Pweese?? Pwetty pwease?? With a chewwy on top?? You won't be updating "End of Innocence" for a while? Awww, that makes me feel sad. But I get a new story to read, so it isn't all that bad. *shrugs* You should continue it, by all means. 8/10

Author's Response: Q: I wonder what happened to make Lily hate him?

A: You'll see soon enough

Q:Sirius and James's meeting will be fun to read, but will they instantly hit is off?

A: Nope!

Q:But how will James and Sirius find out about his 'fury little problem'?

A: I'm working on it. It's going to be in second year though.

Q:My only objection is that Peter *eyes narrow* has to be in it

A: Sorry!

Q:Could you have him disappear and not show up at all in the story? If you have to have him, would it be at all possible if you wouldn't focus on him, and only mention him briefly?

A: It has to focus on him sometimes but because of you I will not be putting him in sometimes!

Q:You won't be updating "End of Innocence" for a while?

A: Next Update on that story is on April 10th


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