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Review:superstar_12 says:
Well, I thought it was fairly well. But here is some advice for your next chapter.
1. Make sure you are putting all your quotations when Harry, Ron, Hermione. or even Ginny and Malfoy are talking. It gets a little confusing. See paragraph 2.

2. After you end someone talking, make sure you say who said that. Or maybe go to a new paragraph. See paragraphs 3, 4, & 5.

3. Also, make sure you are spelling your words right. Paragraph 1 'rund' I think you mean round. Paragraph 3 'juped' I think you mean jumped. In paragraph 4 thank you is two words and so is my lady.

Again, these are just suggestions so if you don' tthink there worth it you don't have to change the way you write. I wish you good luck! My score is 8/10.

Author's Response: Thank you your points are very helpful the next story I write I will be sure to take this into account again thank you.

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